This is no where NEAR as good as his piece... but I kinda like it..
Eyes.
They glow.
Some say they are windows to the soul.
I am drawn to meet their gaze
with my own, but
the feelings they express
make me break away.
Those windows
to your soul-
I'm afraid to look through.
If I see your soul-
suddenly you will become frighteningly real.
If you are real-
well then, I can't laugh you off.
And I'll have lost
my only escape route.
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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for showing me that there are more to eyes than what I've been writing. After "You Eyes (Orbs Divine)" I had the hardest time thinking of something to write about that didn't seem to repeat what I'd already written. This piece is a load of help, even if I did read it a little late.
ReplyDeleteNo problem! I read your piece, once again I LOVED it
ReplyDeleteAlicia - Another good piece. This one made me think.
ReplyDeleteGreg - See? This is what I was talking about way back when. :-)